Smoke and Lightning (A Naruto Fanfiction) [Complete]

Smoke and Lightning (A Naruto Fanfiction) [Complete]

33K Reads 1.4K Votes 11 Part Story
Kat By UnchainedHeart Completed

Years before Team 7 was formed, Hatake Kakashi was a member of ANBU. During this time he found it hard to find pleasure in anything, the faces of his dead friends haunting his every moment. It was this that caused him to begin to draw a line between himself and those surrounding him. Sometimes, however, lines drawn are crossed by the most unlikely of people. 

She has no name, nor does she have a past. She simply exists to follow what others tell her to do and to be passed from person to person under the orders of a man that she'd rather have nothing to do with. She doesn't talk- there is no need for it. It's not required for someone to speak when they follow orders. One day, however, the existance she's known is shattered as a white-haired ANBU shinobi shows up, under orders to bring her back to Konoha. 

For the first time in her life, she feels curious. Curiosity leads to pushing against this stranger's boundaries and seeing just how much one, small existance crossing a line can change the lives around them. 

**Prequel to Painless**
**Cover made by Arctic_Sky**

caveire caveire Jul 28
Like a Lil duckling following momma XD kakashi your a mother hen!
Moon487 Moon487 Jun 10
While I read the story's description, really epic music started playing, and I immediately thought, "I have to read this".
Its actually women in general, especially when "its the time of the month" for them.
Katsukimeow145 Katsukimeow145 Sep 09, 2015
Nice intro, but maybe try lines that are drawn, instead of lines drawn to let them know that someone is crossing the line not the person crossing the line is drawing it. No mistakes so far! ;)
hormotionally- hormotionally- Aug 18, 2015
It's interesting that she has a curse mark. Maybe the smoke is from Theres? Anyways, the plot is playing out quite nicely. I can see how this is going to turn out. I noticed a few grammatical errors, but nothing over that. Onto the next chapter!
Wingal Wingal Jul 17, 2015
There was a couple grammatical mistakes I noticed, but the writing was clean aside from that. I enjoy reading your writing; it's pleasing. The concept also makes the story rather enjoyable. I can't wait to see how the relationship between the girl and Kakashi develops.