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Maki By MakiTokito Completed

How much trouble can one girl get into? Plenty. When three guys kidnap her to get her to not only help with illegal dealings but hopefully help stop it at the same time. What do you do, watch him hurt himself, or turn him in and risk never seeing him again? Who does she really need to turn to?

MakiTokito MakiTokito Jul 18, 2010
@ChristiesBlvd I hope you do if you like it ;) It's almsot over though, so you'll have time to read it without getting far behind lol 
MakiTokito MakiTokito Jun 28, 2010
@katybug I think at that point that was before he realized what she did, but even still, he didn't want her to fear him, because he wanted her to help him, so beating her wasn't going to help too much there...obviously wasn't that out of it to think straight XD 
madsj20 madsj20 May 05, 2010
really good im gonna keep reading :D
                              oh and thank you sooooo much for all the ideas!
munshi munshi Nov 18, 2009
                              its really interesting
                              u hav 2 right more
                              yr right i dont fing any1 has written a story like this!!!!!!