Hell's Promise [ON HOLD]

Hell's Promise [ON HOLD]

993 Reads 125 Votes 10 Part Story
Charlie Hazell By Charlie-Hazell Updated Oct 19, 2013

They say that death can never be cheated. that the devil himself marks the victims who evaded him like a promise of a merciless ending.
You think it will never happen to you...

  • death
  • demon
  • devil
  • fear
  • heartache
  • hellspromise
  • insanity
  • mental
  • monster
  • nightmare
  • possesion
  • promise
  • punishment
Love_To_Write_5554 Love_To_Write_5554 Jan 17, 2013
This is really short.Nice two sentences, but I don't like short chapters. (Or is it a prologue?) That's about it I guess.
Charlie-Hazell Charlie-Hazell Jan 17, 2013
@23_cherry_23 Thank you so much, I will take a look at the spellings! :D Thank you for reading
Charlie-Hazell Charlie-Hazell Jan 14, 2013
@ClaireTslove No problem! Was glad I read it! Commented and voted
utopianism utopianism Jan 14, 2013
I think this one is good not only because of good punctuation, but because it was dark and emotive! Keep it up! rmb to check mine! http://www.wattpad.com/story/3719462-the-girl-with-the-orange-hair
LilyRedRidingHood LilyRedRidingHood Jan 10, 2013
aww this was a really great first chapter :) I enjoyed it a lot, it's really well written without it dragging on and on, you're a really good writer!
LilyRedRidingHood LilyRedRidingHood Jan 10, 2013
This isn't the only chapter I'm commenting on, I just wanted to say that those two sentences are really beautiful...I'm kind of a fan of quality over quantity.