Katie is sweet and smart while Ember mean and a fighting meachieen. What do these girls have in common nothing right? Wrong. Katie and Ember are the same person split into two. And things are about to get a lot worse.
It's sooooooo short, and you NEED speechmarks! Otherwise it's pants, however the idea is good.
Yeah I totally agree, plus it needs to be longer than that, it has really good potential, you just need to tweak it :)
i like it, its a good start!
1 thing i think u should go slow abit cuz its all happening too quick, ur paragraph needs to be sorted too. am not tring to sound mean or anything - i means its so good for a first story but i kno u could do much better!
keep it up! voted!
FREAKEN AMAZING. eme loves u.
and i love you. and everyone loves you. and
ur story is cool. like me.