Her Second Love

Her Second Love

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HIndia150 By HIndia150 Completed

"Beautiful," he exclaimed while looking at her with eyes filled with pure adoration and love.

He kissed her shoulders and slowly, gently bent down kissing her breasts one at a time, as she leaned her head back feeling his heated, delicious breath whenever he touched her. His hands continued to explore her as she caressed his back and bit softly on his neck. He ran his tongue all over her body as her hair sparkled. Her skin was soft and inviting as they clung to each other. He felt her hands on his back pulling him closer.

- - Sep 13, 2015
I like how he had a moustache, not many books have characters with facial hair.
blissit blissit Feb 07, 2014
Yes it is a delightful cover , so I bid you a thank you as well :) .
AmiAldea AmiAldea Nov 03, 2013
I'm here! I'm here! As promised, I am going to vote those chapters I've done reading but since I was reading it offline that is why I wasn't able to vote even if i do wanted to :))
xxSMxx xxSMxx Aug 24, 2013
I like your style of writing, its very clean and well-written. The short descriptions and Lily's passion, as opposed to the lengthy plot lines that I read in most stories, this is pretty different ^^
trisha2261 trisha2261 Aug 04, 2013
Very well written and interesting. I agree; this is as good as anything I have read that has been published. Your very talented.
Hellgirl1113 Hellgirl1113 Feb 05, 2013
I like how you add the elements of history and your setting is very visual:) I think you could actually publish this because it's just so structured and interesting, as well as very organized:)