Raindrops {in editing:)}

Raindrops {in editing:)}

1.5K Reads 6 Votes 14 Part Story
Allie By bbkarma182 Updated Apr 26, 2011

Serena is just a normal girl, other than the fact that she has wings. On her fifteenth birthday something goes wrong and her life changes forever. Now she must journey across countries and through portals to find those of her kind and gather. But is it all just deja vou?

MeoWsChu MeoWsChu Mar 10, 2011
omg i really like it :)
                              the last part, was david going to tell her he likes/loves her?!
                              cant wait to read more :)
                              
                              btw please read my stories 
                              thanks :)
                              
                              ~Tina~
bbkarma182 bbkarma182 Jan 02, 2011
@Laurpog thanks for actually reading it and thanks for the advice:)
Laurpog Laurpog Jan 02, 2011
Nice job, but I would suggest adding a bit more description of the place that Serena is living in, it would give the reader a bigger more detailed picture of what's going on. :)
LetsFlyAway LetsFlyAway Jun 26, 2010
I don't really feel it yet but keep going I'll be sure to read it !!! :) 
                              plz read my story called "I liked you and you didn't you didn't know" thanxs 
                              keep going !!!!!!