The Cheyenne

The Cheyenne

130K Reads 4.6K Votes 12 Part Story
Bethany Porteous By BethanyShayPorteous Updated Jun 24, 2017

Vivian Walters is travelling to the New World in the 1700's with her father and best friend Elizabeth, lovingly known as Bessie. Settling in Illinois alongside the Spanish, Vivian falls into her new life. When the town is under attack from savages, Bessie and Vivian are captured by savages, taken across the desert plains and forced to marry an imposing Indian who seems to know nothing of the word 'personal space'. But Vivian thinking that that was the worst, is about to have her world shaken when she finds the savages aren't what they claim to be.

  • american
  • cheyenne
  • kidnapped
  • mate
  • native
abditive abditive Sep 02, 2017
I find it so funny how they called the natives "savages" when they were the ones that lacked the most basic practices of hygiene .
Great work! I have to say tho that u restated yourself in the last phrase tho
XUnfinishedXSentencX XUnfinishedXSentencX Sep 30, 2017
Why humans why does our history have to be like this it makes me disappointed in the human race and sad to be white
ThatWingman ThatWingman Jan 19
This gets me so pissed. 😡 But I also like how you added this in since it was a part of history and a lot of one's I've read tried to shy away from it. Sorry if this offends anyone in anyway.
I find it funny how they call them 'savages' when it was a white man who removed the first scalp.
LadySatan666 LadySatan666 Jun 20, 2016
I actually like reading this so far.. its caught my attention. ..  good job on writing..