The Cheyenne

The Cheyenne

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Bethany Porteous By BethanyShayPorteous Updated Jul 10

Vivian Walters is travelling to the New World in the 1700's with her father and best friend Elizabeth, lovingly known as Bessie. Settling in Illinois alongside the Spanish, Vivian falls into her new life. When the town is under attack from savages, Bessie and Vivian are captured by savages, taken across the desert plains and forced to marry an imposing Indian who seems to know nothing of the word 'personal space'. But Vivian thinking that that was the worst, is about to have her world shaken when she finds the savages aren't what they claim to be.

I actually like reading this so far.. its caught my attention. ..  good job on writing..
putunee putunee Oct 08, 2013
yippee kayyeeeee....ano great story to be read and waited for.
EllieD1717 EllieD1717 Jun 05, 2013
You did your research alright, it's 100% historically correct for the time period
WolfGirlLove43 WolfGirlLove43 May 29, 2013
I just finish the first chapter an it was awesome I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jemappelle jemappelle May 27, 2013
Great chapter! Please update sooner next time though please :)
srsbookcrazed srsbookcrazed Apr 10, 2013
I love that you just took the initiative and wrote one yourself!! I've been thinking of doing that about my favorite topic for a while now