My Brothers Best Friend

My Brothers Best Friend

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Ambers brother, Jake, he had some interesting friends but to Amber, one stuck out the most of all to her.

Oliver had a past, he held many secrets with him, and many enemies. 
How badly does Ambers life turn when she gets to know him more than she thought she ever would.

I have brown hair, freckles and greenish hazel eyes and my name is Amber too
ChristyMiller649 ChristyMiller649 Mar 18, 2016
I expected a bit more fight out of Oliver then to just give up and walk out
kys-bruh kys-bruh Dec 21, 2016
I don't like this so far. Because it's already telling you EVERYTHING. Like, a good story gives you details and shiz slowly and randomly throughout the story. For example. Instead of telling the reader he has blue eyes, wait till later in and say  'I stared into his blue eyes' oops:3
kianlawley-bae kianlawley-bae Nov 03, 2015
I was just reading a book called my brothers best friend. And the brother was called jake ahah