Murder in Wonderland

Murder in Wonderland

4 Part Story 11.5K Reads 345 Votes
Amy Deal By AmyDeal Updated Jan 16, 2015

Lacie always enjoyed her sister, Alice's, company. They always skipped stones by the river and spoke of a dazzling new place called Wonderland. Alice claimed to have visited Wonderland and told Lacie all about her adventures and all the creatures she had encountered. But that was all in the past. Alice had disappeared a year ago and had left Lacie with a few parting words, "Remember to find the White Rabbit when I'm no longer here to tell you of Wonderland." What happened to Alice? Will Lacie uncover the truth? A budding, forbidden romance? Go on, read and find out.

AliceLiddle4 AliceLiddle4 Jan 05, 2016 09:50PM
i think i know where the story is going to lead off!!!
                                    maybe idk
                                    im just predicting
michellelaurax michellelaurax Jan 16, 2015 11:51AM
This is interesting so far and your writing is good, though you keep switching between present and past tense which can be a little distracting, so maybe you could revise the chapter and correct it. Just a tip though :)
saltywhispers saltywhispers Oct 01, 2012 03:06AM
i always love alice in wonderland and im  soo happy you wrote this its really great book. c;
Icybear Icybear Apr 25, 2012 03:20AM
This is AMAZING! Please please please please keep writing!!!
ammoon15 ammoon15 Mar 28, 2012 02:46AM
It's almost been a year, please update!! This is an excellent book, and I love the unique story line, I can't wait till she goes into wonderland!
iamranim iamranim Dec 11, 2011 01:35PM
y dont u continue ur stories? :/ but gd btw i read freak academy as well i like that better in my opinion~ i looove ur writing sorry if i offended u in any way :/