a chick is a mouse who fights evil
WHEN NO IS AROUND WHAT REALLY HAPPENS????
it's kinda confusing, i think u should put more detail in to it and write some more, like how it began
hahahaha. i went ballistic on this one:
"i want you to be the mother of my children, and then rule the world together."
"if you want me to do that, you must first kill me, then him."\
hahaha. :D write, more.