Please Be There (An Anorexic Girl Story)

Please Be There (An Anorexic Girl Story)

19 Part Story 255K Reads 3.6K Votes
Cheesehead By cheesehead Completed

Brenda's whole life she was teased for being fat. It even got to the point where her nickname was Brownie because when she was little she would quickly eat all of her Mom's brownies!! Eventually, Brenda decided to take matters into her own hands. Slowly Brenda become anorexic, but no one notices until she steps into Mrs. Colleen Rose's classroom. Brenda still tries to lose weight, but Mrs. Rose refuses to stand by and watch. A bond forms between the student and the teacher that might be able to get Brenda healthy again. But what happens if Brenda refuses to get better? And what if Mrs. Rose refuses to give up on getting Brenda healthier? Don't ask me, read for yourself:)

Hawwwee_61013 Hawwwee_61013 May 18, 2015 01:13AM
Learn how you use proper "your" and "you're"s. Honestly this is the 5'th time
crazyeyes75 crazyeyes75 Apr 14, 2015 02:33AM
This is why I suck up to my teachers. I barely ever have homework.
parzate17 parzate17 Apr 10, 2015 09:20PM
I think the story goes to fast. I mean in less than 10 hours the teacher already knows she's anorexic :/ it is a little unrealistic, but I am interested in the rest of the story
Hold on, this is confusing because the teacher said 8th graders but in the beginning of the story, you said seniors.
schem1ng_v1xen schem1ng_v1xen Feb 15, 2011 04:09AM
awww the bitch lady isn't so crazy... ish. and that didn't seem to stalker-y teachers do that all the time where i'm from.
                                    
                                    great chapter. very intense ending.
Heygirl124 Heygirl124 Feb 04, 2011 03:13AM
I just wanted to let u know most anorexics don't always not eat cuz they wanna be skinny, but because they are depressed or something bad happened to them. And their stomach feels full sometimes because they convince ourselves that it is.