Please Be There (An Anorexic Girl Story)

Please Be There (An Anorexic Girl Story)

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Cheesehead By cheesehead Completed

Brenda's whole life she was teased for being fat. It even got to the point where her nickname was Brownie because when she was little she would quickly eat all of her Mom's brownies!! Eventually, Brenda decided to take matters into her own hands. Slowly Brenda become anorexic, but no one notices until she steps into Mrs. Colleen Rose's classroom. Brenda still tries to lose weight, but Mrs. Rose refuses to stand by and watch. A bond forms between the student and the teacher that might be able to get Brenda healthy again. But what happens if Brenda refuses to get better? And what if Mrs. Rose refuses to give up on getting Brenda healthier? Don't ask me, read for yourself:)

  • 911
  • accent
  • announced
  • anorexia
  • baby
  • birthday
  • bleeding
  • book
  • brenda
  • brothers
  • brownie
  • brownies
  • cash
  • chuckled
  • classroom
  • cover
  • crowd
  • cry
  • cupcake
  • die
  • dizzy
  • drove
  • embrace
  • fat
  • fiddled
  • fighting
  • fived
  • flashback
  • fragile
  • friend
  • friends
  • funny
  • golfing
  • graduating
  • growled
  • grumbled
  • high
  • homework
  • hospital
  • hungry
  • hurting
  • jail
  • kill
  • kissed
  • kitchen
  • lies
  • lock
  • loudly
  • melanie
  • microphone
  • miniture
  • money
  • murmured
  • nodded
  • overreacting
  • phone
  • please
  • police
  • publisher
  • raved
  • repeated
  • road
  • scared
  • school
  • screamed
  • setback
  • shoved
  • shower
  • sick
  • sighed
  • slamming
  • smile
  • smiled
  • sob
  • sobbed
  • southern
  • spinning
  • stalker
  • stood
  • stopped
  • stupid
  • suggested
  • surprised
  • sympathy
  • talk
  • talking
  • tears
  • thank
  • therapy
  • throwing
  • tight
  • treadmill
  • whimpered
  • widely
  • work
  • writing
  • yourself
Isn’t 8th grade in middle school???? I think you meant to put 12th grade?
Bitch?! I know you ain't gonna be one of those formal vitchy snobs.
Wait what I'm an eight graders I thought this was about seniors
My teacher tells us to raise our hands, but when we do she just looks us in the eye and ignores you. When you don't she takes some of your recess
- - Feb 02, 2017
It really isn't. There do much more work, especially in Texas, because we have more testing. It's a pass the tests, go to freshman year, fail, and repeat eighth grade.
ErmaEevans606 ErmaEevans606 Jun 28, 2016
she understands she probably just wrote the wrong thing she can fix it if she wants