Hidden Wings (Will be undergoing MAJOR EDITING)

Hidden Wings (Will be undergoing MAJOR EDITING)

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pennamed By pennamed Updated Sep 13, 2011

Sulitha, nickname Sui, is your average teenager. Attending school, or meeting up with friends; everything was going fine—until a mysterious guy, K-E-I-N disturbs the normal flow of her life. After trying desperately to find out who he is and having the chance to see him again, Sui starts to unravel a mystery—her lead being a single feather that Kein dropped in the forest a year before.
Stumbling upon a strange little gift shop in a big town, she finds a strange book. Within its pages is the half-truths of the urban legends of the Nixia.
As her birthday fast approaches, strange things start to happen in her life which she cannot control. What is her connection to the Winged people? Will her life ever be normal if she finds out who they are? And will she and K-E-I-N ever meet?

Munni101 Munni101 Nov 30, 2010
Seems interesting!!! But I am a bit confused......doing 3 things at the same time makes my conc lowwwww............. liking it though! xD
pennamed pennamed Nov 16, 2010
@chairsniffa ooh thanks! i didn't notice that, lol. i'll change it when i get the time. =)
                              
                              @frakkevin okay! i totally understand.. =) thanks for the comment!
KAFrak KAFrak Nov 15, 2010
@chairsniffa smart man, I didnt even notice that. Your eyes are truly the best
pennamed pennamed Nov 12, 2010
@myMockingjay glad you liked it! and nope i don't know Mortal instruments. :D 
myMockingjay myMockingjay Nov 12, 2010
wow.. you totally got me hooked..my, I'm turning to love science fiction again!! LOL.. great story.. btw, do you know Mortal Instruments?lol,completely off-subject but it's what I'm reading right now, I think your story is as great! :))))))))))))))))) 
chairsniffa chairsniffa Oct 16, 2010
Your descriptions are very deep and uniquely you. Nice stuff an intriguely written prologue for sure.