His Weakness

His Weakness

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The_Truest_Believer By The_Truest_Believer Completed

Mackenzie Grey was a little girl when Peter found her. They lived together in means to survive and they were closer than any two people could be. But one day, Mackenzie is taken away by the Queen, Cora, and is forced to work for her. Peter never saw her again, that is, not until now. 

Based off of the Peter Pan story with a twist from the marvelous Once Upon A Time series on ABC.

faypol faypol Jul 13
I'm literally ONE chapter into this story and I'm already crying 😭
affinxty affinxty Jul 18
wow great parents one day I'm gonna send my 6 year old to live in the woods alone just like them
its an easy way to get rid of the parents and make the readers hate em
Flashback to the 2003 Peter Pan movie😭😭😭...literally watched that movie so many times that I can recite it perfectly and I have no shame in that😂
Wow great parents hey, they definitely need parenting 101 tips
Accio__Book Accio__Book Jul 25
I have come up with about 1000000 sassy comebacks to say but I just don't wanna ruin the moment 😂😂