His Weakness

His Weakness

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The_Truest_Believer By The_Truest_Believer Completed

Mackenzie Grey was a little girl when Peter found her. They lived together in means to survive and they were closer than any two people could be. But one day, Mackenzie is taken away by the Queen, Cora, and is forced to work for her. Peter never saw her again, that is, not until now. 

Based off of the Peter Pan story with a twist from the marvelous Once Upon A Time series on ABC.

  • adventure
  • neverland
  • ouat
  • peterpan
laylachan055 laylachan055 Nov 14, 2017
This is like my third time rereading this is just like to say thank you author for creating such a great story. It's truly inspiring and gives me hope to write and creating such amazing storylines. Thank you 😊
bruised_ bruised_ Jan 26
That’s kinda weird tho like he’s just some random boy who she just met and spilled her guts to and he’s like we’re family now
Fandom_TrashGirl Fandom_TrashGirl Oct 23, 2017
I'm crying 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
QueenRose20 QueenRose20 Oct 07, 2017
Just imagining Cora looking at Mac and saying, "Love is weakness"
startled-starfish startled-starfish Oct 30, 2017
Am I the only one thinking of Doctor Who? Mickey the Idiot, anyone?
Am8ris Am8ris Dec 11, 2017
....Just casually imagining my sister being given this note.
                              
                              ...Yeah. Um. Pretty sure she’d die in like two days.