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His Weakness

His Weakness

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The_Truest_Believer By The_Truest_Believer Completed

Mackenzie Grey was a little girl when Peter found her. They lived together in means to survive and they were closer than any two people could be. But one day, Mackenzie is taken away by the Queen, Cora, and is forced to work for her. Peter never saw her again, that is, not until now. 

Based off of the Peter Pan story with a twist from the marvelous Once Upon A Time series on ABC.

MendesL0ver MendesL0ver Apr 11
for some reason it took me a while to realize that she's not gonna but him handcuffs😂 I was like oh maybe that's how they say it in England and she's britosh😂 I was so confused
bethisabear bethisabear Mar 28
That's so wrong, but at least it was blunt and honest instead of one of these 'we went out be back soon' nonsense notes
Nope. Hey! Why are you crying? Me? Nope!, Psshhh totes not crying!  Maybe......... 😭
IM CHOKING ON MY CRACKERS CUZ MY FANGIRL IS WANTING TO COME OUT SO BAD
Ummm well just because she looks eighteen forever doesnt mean shes not aging every single year is how long youve lived sooooo she cant change that unless she kills her
MendesL0ver MendesL0ver Apr 11
How typical. A parent leaving their child hmmm pan isn't that soooo typical