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His Weakness

His Weakness

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The_Truest_Believer By The_Truest_Believer Completed

Mackenzie Grey was a little girl when Peter found her. They lived together in means to survive and they were closer than any two people could be. But one day, Mackenzie is taken away by the Queen, Cora, and is forced to work for her. Peter never saw her again, that is, not until now. 

Based off of the Peter Pan story with a twist from the marvelous Once Upon A Time series on ABC.

MendesL0ver MendesL0ver Apr 11
for some reason it took me a while to realize that she's not gonna but him handcuffs😂 I was like oh maybe that's how they say it in England and she's britosh😂 I was so confused
oh well it's not like they abandoned her for eternal youth or anything, right? (-_-)
I'VE ONLY BEEN READING FOR LIKE 4 MINUTES AND NOW I'M CRYING
MistyCoco5 MistyCoco5 May 08
I wish my grandparents would do that to me we'd have to fight
Hi I love you ok so now I'm gonna leave you to rot have fun!!
MendesL0ver MendesL0ver Apr 11
How typical. A parent leaving their child hmmm pan isn't that soooo typical