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Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: Hard Shell, Soft Heart

Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: Hard Shell, Soft Heart

26.3K Reads 999 Votes 17 Part Story
Krimson Jinx Orchid By KrimsonOrchid Completed

Rayne is no ordinary girl, she's kept locked away from the outside world. She is seventeen and has black hair, tanish skin, and aone blue the other one brown eyes. She waked to find she is kidnapped by the only people that can defeat her father. While being captive, love blossoms. They've all fallen hard for Rayne, but who will Rayne fall for?

(If you believe any names are spelt wrong please say, but the turtles names are correct, I took my time to look it up and double check. BTW I didn't get the turtles off of the t.v show, like I'm not using facts from the show. I'm just taking the characters, writing a story/stories about them, and all. Just yo clear that out. I do not own any TMNT, I only own Rayne)

Jesseandlucasforever Jesseandlucasforever Feb 09, 2016
OMG I am going to die of excitement 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃I LOVE NINJA TURTLES THIS PERSON IS AMAZING!
awe :) I'm a little ninja!? Did you people hear that!? She called me a little ninja! I'm so HAPPYYYYYY! :D well, technically she called all of us lil ninjas but... I still feel special :)
NinjaLeader NinjaLeader Jan 14, 2016
Not a bad start. I felt like I wanted more 2 the story after it ended. I wish there was more.   PS.  Thanks 4 spelling the names rite. When their spelt wrong it always gets on my nerves.
RagingFlames RagingFlames Jun 09, 2015
I like the idea of teenage mutant ninja turtle fanfic just work on those few errors and you'll do fine.
RagingFlames RagingFlames Jun 09, 2015
There's a couple spelling and the quote needs to be done properly
RagingFlames RagingFlames Jun 09, 2015
There's only a few errors, spelling mistakes and one sentence fragment but it's a very good intro.