CURRENTLY BEING EDITED!!!
Sorry if I was harsh in my comment. I like the story. Certain things bother me and I don't know why because it's just a story. @Lilyhyperbabe
I live in philadelphia. I don't mean to offend anybody but I have never seen a newborn baby go in the front seat. In most cars the seat is heavy enough to trigger the airbag. Sorry if I offended you. @Lilhyperbabe
It's a good story. She can breast feed too. If you can have a baby, you can breast feed.
It's a good story so far but isn't it illegal for a baby, especially newborn, to be put in the front seat??
Your trying really hard. I can tell. What I think is that I'm really glad I gave my daughter her fathers last name. We married when she was almost 5. I also thought about how different my life might have turned out if I had my fathers name, if I never heard the word "bastard" used to describe me.
@ViaHeart I second that! If you would slow it down justice bit your story would be even more amazing! Great plotline