Tiny Dancer

Tiny Dancer

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dumbledoreswingman By dumbledoreswingman Completed

18 year old professional ballerina Lucy finally got her break she'd been waiting for her whole life, her dream job at the most popular dance school in the world.
Being paid to teach celebrities to dance, easy right? Well it was until she was assigned One Direction, and  boy these lads aren't dancers.

OMG NEVER DO THAT DO YOU WANT TO BE PERMANENTLY DISABLED IVE BEEN DANCING SINCE I WAS 3
AdvancedSurferGirl AdvancedSurferGirl Mar 13, 2015
Don't ever try to do that. Their not made to land on. You land flat then go en pointe
travel_lover123 travel_lover123 Sep 17, 2014
Your going to blow your knee out if you do that, NEVER TRY TO LAND ON POINTE AFTER A JUMP. (I've been dancing ballet since I was 2 and I've been on pointe since I was 11 and I'm 13)
brokenandburning brokenandburning Feb 18, 2013
bla bla bla everyone stop trying to fix her story, its fine, and no one is makin you read it, so stop tellin her jut what you think is wrong with her story! gah you people drive me crazy
NerissaMcC NerissaMcC Nov 24, 2012
There are several mistakes; for example, there should be a question mark after "a band I know little about". And the language might be deserving of a higher rating.
CraiSeiSmile CraiSeiSmile Oct 13, 2012
Nice introduction and whatnot, a little rough around the edges, but it has substance :)