This Can't Be Love

This Can't Be Love

103K Reads 2.5K Votes 29 Part Story
Gustavo Brito By NaturalGus Completed

Aaron's so-called "love" for Samantha borders an unhealthy obsession that drives him to do whatever it takes -or whatever he THINKS would take- to conquer her heart.

  • love
  • mystery
  • obsession
  • psychotic
  • romance
  • thriller
edward2259 edward2259 Dec 28, 2016
I like how you got straight to the point. Just jumped into the story really really nice I'm already hooked on to it
ADCxoDPC ADCxoDPC Jul 22, 2014
Aaron's pretty taken with Samantha. Not sure how stable he is yet but maybe I'll end up rooting for him lol. Great start :)
NaturalGus NaturalGus Mar 18, 2013
@Call_Me_Maddi
                              :-D thank you! lol (i mean, i'm still awkward and a tad silly, but i guess I'm not as much a loser as I let on...)
                              
                              I hope you LOVE the story, I really do! I look forward to seeing what you think of it! :) Thanks so much!!
kansasbloom kansasbloom Feb 05, 2013
Dun dun duuuuuuuun (rubs hands together gleefully) I can't wait to see what happens
MeghanMRiley MeghanMRiley Oct 26, 2012
I personally prefer more showing than telling, which you do a lot in this chapter, but I'm interested to see how this develops.
SeriousMoonlight SeriousMoonlight Sep 26, 2012
I liked the narration, so much so that I read on to chapter 2 without voting and commenting. So I had to come back and vote. >>;;
                              
                              The main character Aaron is interesting, can't wait to read more about this strange man.