A vampires slave

A vampires slave

25.6K Reads 587 Votes 9 Part Story
Teyasia By YounqBeauty Updated Dec 17, 2014

When 14 year old Virgin Mariah mets a vampire that buys her as his slave they think there in love with each other but are then will she lose her virginty what will happen read to find out!!

jadaparkks jadaparkks Oct 10
I am dying of extreme laughter right now I seriously can not wtf did I just read
As an enthusiastic reader and occasional writer of crappy books, I hate to say this but this book sucks :/ sorry
do you know how to write?!?! This sucks! you can't even space out what they say?
The idea of a fourteen girl thinking someone's voice is sexy is rather scary. I'm changing her age in my head cause this sounds like she's on hormonal drug.
                              
                              Sexual, hey girl if you want to feel sexual you could always call up a professional. They stick needles in you like a vegetable.
KylieMargaret KylieMargaret Oct 04, 2012
The next scene should be about Miriah and Alex something major should happen in that like an argument and Alex does something very bad like makes her a vamp or its another Nasty scene
                              tell me what u think please
YounqBeauty YounqBeauty Oct 04, 2012
@vampirekylie244 Kay I haven't been righting since writers block so I kinda need help I guess lol