A vampires slave

A vampires slave

31.7K Reads 794 Votes 9 Part Story
Teyasia By YounqBeauty Updated Dec 17, 2014

When 14 year old Virgin Mariah mets a vampire that buys her as his slave they think there in love with each other but are then will she lose her virginty what will happen read to find out!!

    Interesting and cringy lol its not bad it just sounds like a little kid trying to tell a rated r story
    uaarukatjo uaarukatjo Jun 09
    Are u mad this is pretty nasty how old are u to be writing such nasty things.
    jadaparkks jadaparkks Oct 10, 2016
    I am dying of extreme laughter right now I seriously can not wtf did I just read
    atropos_moirai atropos_moirai May 10, 2016
    As an enthusiastic reader and occasional writer of crappy books, I hate to say this but this book sucks :/ sorry
    blue_shadow12 blue_shadow12 Oct 18, 2016
    do you know how to write?!?! This sucks! you can't even space out what they say?
    theparkercameron theparkercameron May 30, 2016
    The idea of a fourteen girl thinking someone's voice is sexy is rather scary. I'm changing her age in my head cause this sounds like she's on hormonal drug.
                                  
                                  Sexual, hey girl if you want to feel sexual you could always call up a professional. They stick needles in you like a vegetable.