Trying the Terror (on hold)

Trying the Terror (on hold)

11 Part Story 4.4K Reads 98 Votes
bloodyresolve By bloodyresolve Updated Aug 31, 2010

Ciel lives in a country where experimental military weapons,named Terras, have gone rogue and roam the streets in the darkness threatening civilian lives. She struggles to continue her routine of a reclusive life but the 17 year old  finds herself the target of multiple Terra attacks. As Ciel begins to accept her bad luck the new kid Kyle steps in and becomes her guardian. However things aren't as black and white as they seem and it turns out that the Terras are a lot closer to Ciel than she ever realised.
    
    (Previously called What are you scared of)

bloodyresolve bloodyresolve Nov 08, 2010 01:34AM
@gothgirl :) that's enough for me heehe oh, sorry about the cursing :S hope you continue reading on thou (i kinda stopped using the explicits with the later chapters, the cursing gets old lol)
gothgirl gothgirl Nov 08, 2010 01:29AM
wow this is rly great! i have not had time to read all it yet. sadly i must get off now. have to fishinish up some HW. i luv it all, besides the profanity. :) wonderful job! 
bloodyresolve bloodyresolve Jul 21, 2010 06:35PM
@Nunatak lol Ceil's a guys name where you are that's funny, cause its one of my bestie's names and she's a girl. its actually like French creole but the noun is feminine so i assumed it was for a female. Lmao she'll probably try to strangle haha
Birdy_Brain Birdy_Brain Jul 10, 2010 04:58PM
:OOOOOOOOOO
                                    this is actually really good.
                                    yay a story worth reading... i've only found a few that ACTUALLY engage me.
                                    yay again :D
bloodyresolve bloodyresolve Jul 09, 2010 04:25PM
@Noctis That's encouraging :S 
                                    Yeah lol exactly as in earth... and if you pick up the other element don't sell it out yet please 
Okay so i read it again and it's amazing xcept for a few iffy-bitty grammatical errors, keep writing your really good at it.  I'm definately gonna keep at readin this! Oh, and thx for reading my story I reeeeeallly appeticate it. :D