I Broke the Rule (Anakin Skywalker love story)

I Broke the Rule (Anakin Skywalker love story)

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Melissa Mills By MelissaMills6 Updated Mar 30, 2013

Chapter 1:

I stand here watching the ships go by. It brings me to a flashback of about ten years ago. 

We all swung our sabers in sync, trying to follow Master Yoda's orders. Then, a man named Qui-Gon Jin and his apprentice Obi-Wan Kenobi came with a young boy. I stopped swinging, I was so focused on this mysterious boy. Is this that 'Chosen One' that they've been whispering about? I bet. I turned and looked at the boy, he was kind of cute. He saw me and I gave him a friendly smile. And he smiled back. The buzzing and vibration of my lightsaber almost broke my concentration. Then that feeling of danger came over me. I spun around and blocked the pupil that was next to me from almost slicing my head off. "Nice try Pol," I grinned. 

 I come back to reality. "Good, send them in," the chancellor says to the hologram. Chancellor Palpatine somewhat finishes his little speech and Miss Padme walks in. They all talk of the most recent assassination attempt. No one really bothers me, they see...

dankat4 dankat4 Oct 10
I loved your story when I read it in Quotev! Just wanted to say that. ;)
Pluv143000 Pluv143000 Dec 21, 2015
I always spelled it Ani because it didn't seem as feminine lol!
Dogwarrior21 Dogwarrior21 Apr 30, 2015
I have one question, isn't Anikin in love with Padme? Other wise then the movies are nothing.
lipstickbutterflies lipstickbutterflies Sep 27, 2014
Best fanfic I have ever read! Like seriously I have read this at least 10 times.. :D
coexistion coexistion Jul 09, 2014
I love jar jar I don't know why people say he ruined the movie or movies*