My Summer

My Summer

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whosman By whosman Updated May 09

"Let's play a game it is called 21 questions." I said, getting comfortable.

"Okay, that is fine with me." He said, he looked in my eyes, he had no emotion. I couldn't exactly read his face. 

"Good you go first in still thinking is questions." I looked away from him before I did something stupid, like usual.

"Did you kill your dad?" He asked I was about to break down in tears. Why will he asked that? People been asking me that three years and every time they mentioned it I feel like I'm about to cry.

"No, I didn't kill him and what kind of question is that asshole. I thought you will nice and all that but I was wrong!" I yelled at him I just wanted to hurt him so bad.

"Wow it was just a quick question." He said while throwing his hands in the air. Just a question, he knew the answer to that. 

I ran upstairs and got my overnight bag. I was putting some stuff in my bag then I felt arms around my waist. 

"Let go of me James now." I said and when I turned around it wasn't James it was James half brother, Adam.


This one question can change everything 

Adam Forrest: Francisco Lachowski
Angel Smith: Barbara Palvin
Naveena Rohit: Shay Mitchell
Emma Rose: Nina Dobrev
Alexis Peña: Bethany Mota
Jayden Martinze: Sean O'Donnell
William Johnson: Zac Efron

  • badboy
  • goodgirl
  • questions
  • relationships
  • summer
  • unanswered
DeVries42 DeVries42 Feb 20, 2016
Try and make the chapters a little longer and add a little more detail, it's really good other than that though!
thatzmytrauma_ thatzmytrauma_ Sep 03, 2016
Me too I don't eat I just look at my crush😘💋 (NOT A STALKER)
So_In_Love_ So_In_Love_ Apr 30, 2016
The sentences need to be worded better because it's jumbled up or missing a few words but this has potential it just lacks depth and detail.