Midnight Shift

Midnight Shift

11.9K Reads 214 Votes 6 Part Story
Ahmed By AhmedTheSloth Completed

Twelve A.M. Two guards watch over the front gate of an unremarkable, dank prison. What could go wrong? (This story is undergoing MAJOR changes right now - oh, and it's intended for mature readers. Seriously.)

Fattycatstillwell Fattycatstillwell May 24, 2012
Question;  What does idk stand for.
                              Story so far is well written, loving your style of writing.
OscarTheHat OscarTheHat Oct 17, 2011
This is a great passage, you can write really well. Its talent like yours that keep sites like this running. The changing of view or feel of it confused me a little but I am also sitting in class trying to read this under my teacher's nose. Keep up the good writing!
RebeccaElizabethHill RebeccaElizabethHill Jul 06, 2011
Loving this---
                              Added to my library..
                              Also, I finished your cover! lol.
juppjupp juppjupp Jul 12, 2010
I really like your writing style. It's not too detailed, well-written, and even in its shortness, witty. Why is it categorized under Other though? I can't really tell what's gonna happen to the story yet so off to the next chapter! :D
Spud_003 Spud_003 Jul 08, 2010
hahah. Wait are they just guards or police men? Okay reading on...
Sublime_Rivers Sublime_Rivers Jul 01, 2010
That was really good!! You got my vote. I really enjoy your work!!
                              
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