The Rogue Mate

The Rogue Mate

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Allie_Storyteller By Allie_Storyteller Updated Apr 08, 2015

"Hey there Princess." 

That voice. Oh god that voice.

"You know you can't run from me." He grinned. "You're mine."

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Maia grew up in the wild with an angry Alpha trailing her and killing everyone she loves. Life isn't easily for her and a little boy named August, who she promised to protect. August is the only person she loved and the only that prevent her from losing her sanity. 
Then comes in an overbearing Alpha who needs to find his Luna; a suitable one not a crazy Rogue.

KatriAdriah KatriAdriah Apr 27
The concept doesn't seem bad so far, but it seems maybe a little rushed? Also, when you do get around to editing, watch out for tense changes. You keep switching back and forth between present and past tense and it breaks up the flow of the story. I look forward to finding out more, though.