Shakespeare's Rolling in his Grave. Probably.
What if Hermione and Draco got sucked into Romeo and Juliet and replaced them? What if the people they knew were characters? And what if, after they got out, they went right back into another one? Well... this is what would happen.
Even the title implies that this is bad. Honestly. If Shakespeare is ROLLING IN HIS GRAVE, it's not good, okay? I find this story really frigging stupid. If you like it, that's fine (I don't know WHY) but if you don't, that's even better.