Moonland

Moonland

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Finn Pleuger By DarioTjormson Updated Jun 19

"They slaughtered us, with no mercy: countless women and children were mauled away by them. We had to flee to the mountains. They think we all miserably froze to death but we have adapted. We have grown, become stronger. The demons are gearing up for war, and this time, we will be the ones without mercy."

Dario, May and Ben are normal eleven-year-olds when they get lost in a cave on Iceland and suddenly find themselves in a completely unknown world. Soon they find friends in this magical world: Dario joins the dark elves and Ben and May go with the humans. But what they do not know is that they are in this world to serve a higher purpose: Demons are preparing for war and together with the dark elves they want to kill every human alive in this world. War is coming.

This the first longer story I am loading up on Wattpad and as the language, I am writing in also is not my main language I would be really grateful for constructive feedback and tips. I am also open for suggestions plotwise :) enjoy!