She is mine

She is mine

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Sofia By sofiatheoreolord Updated Jun 07

Emily Carlson is a sweet girl who moves to a new town where she meets Mel and her friends. One of them is Brad Miller, Alpha of the Dark Moon pack which is one of the strongest in California. Emily is his mate and he will stop at nothing to get her but she has a big secret that she desperately wants to hide.

Will it come between them and is Emily really human? 
There's a second Alpha that knows her secret and wants her. Will he get her and was her parents car accident really an accident? 

Follow Emily and Brad on their journey where they will be faced by love, betrayl, sorrow and happiness. Will they get their happy ending or is fate standing in their way?

Xx_Spongeb0b_xX Xx_Spongeb0b_xX Feb 12, 2015
I imagined him as King Kong- beating on his chest with his fist btfol
Confvsedasfvck Confvsedasfvck Sep 15, 2014
Okay sure. That's not what I meant but its fine. Its your story and I'm sure having that little mistake won't make a big difference. Lol
Confvsedasfvck Confvsedasfvck Sep 15, 2014
Like in the beginning where the Cali and brought up and where they are going to live. That's one example
Confvsedasfvck Confvsedasfvck Sep 15, 2014
Awe there brother and sister have the cutest relationship! Your doing good! There are just some errors in the crammer that could be fixed but other then that your story is really good. Keep up the good work!