A Prime's Daughter

A Prime's Daughter

26.3K Reads 942 Votes 15 Part Story
Naila Jimenez By Naila_Jimenez_71 Completed

A pod is lunched from Cybertron during the great war. Optimus Prime watches it as it disappears through a space bridge. A single tear falls from his eye as he looks away. Will the pod have a safe landing on a peaceful planet or will it reach the clutches of the decepticons.

  • daughter
  • family
  • optimus
  • prime
  • transformers
Th3Undertaker Th3Undertaker Jun 18, 2017
Well I almost broke down but I know how it feels to lose a parent
TheNamelessChibi TheNamelessChibi Apr 09, 2017
Now I'm honestly crying my eyes out, and I don't usually cry.
Sandstorm_Prime Sandstorm_Prime Oct 03, 2017
It's quite good very emotional i kinda know the pain my dad is dying as we speak in hospital but i mentioned him in my story at the moment as Thunderstorm Prime but this is fantastic
DanielleNicoleAnsald DanielleNicoleAnsald Aug 09, 2015
*crying* It reminds me of my father. He also drop me in another home, when I was 11 months old. And my foster parents are: Andre and Analie Saludar.
ScarletFoxy ScarletFoxy Jul 25, 2015
The adoptive parents last name better be Noble or else I'll blow a circuit!
BelleForDonut-264 BelleForDonut-264 Dec 30, 2014
It's really good, and sorry that I didn't look at this book earlier. I absaloutly love your style of writing, it catches my eye. It's unique, but different, in a good way.