The ex wife

The ex wife

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Jammy By justtheotherday Updated Feb 23

A tear rolled down my face. "I, Jasmine Rose Michael don't want any money from Rogan Blake Walker." I said quietly but my voice came out very serious it's not like I care anyway.
"Mrs.Walk-" I cut his lawyer off.
"I am Miss.Michael and no that is the final."I stand up. I glanced at him, his eyes his lip his nose his everything for the last time. "Good bye Mr.Walker" I said loudly and walked out.
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Jasmine is a 28 years old woman. She has brown eyes, long dark hair. She's fit. She has a best friend. She has a very loving family. She has almost everything but money. She works 2 jobs. But she's still couldn't afford a good house for her family. 
Rogan is a 34 years old man. He has black eyes, dark brown hair. He's fit with 8 packs. He has no friend. His family hated him. He has almost everything but love. He has 1 job. But he can controls almost everything.

"But now everything are different." => but now everything is different :v
She is from Asian... I guess Asian is an actual location now
Everyone has to start somewhere, good luck with your writing.
Nice start to ur story! I do find that u should do a once over on ur work so that u can fix grammar errors. I found many in this chapter. I love ur attention to characterization it's as if i can picture the MC in my head :) great job!
sneakerhead510 sneakerhead510 Aug 17, 2015
Damn. Typical Asian lol. I'm Asian too so if someone gets offended chill
_KQS_418 _KQS_418 May 01, 2015
how  old are you, you write like your a little kid like maybe 10 or 11