Break Free ✔️

Break Free ✔️

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Samantha Jayne By SamanthaJayne_x Completed

Paige Ward is a teen pop sensation, singing is what made her happy, at least it used to. Taking her break from her career she returns to the place she has avoided for over 6 years, trying to hide a secret from the public can be hard especially when you're a celebrity. Paige returns home to finish her senior year at her high school with all the friends she once left as a child, but she's not just returning home for a break, she's been tasked with the challenge of finding a singer at her school for the next big thing. 

Mason Lewis is the school's bad boys and hangs around with a bad crowd, if it's not doing drugs or sleeping with girls, he doesn't care. When he discovers that Paige Ward would be joining their school he was less than thrilled, knowing everybody would be falling over themselves making this "pop princess" feel welcomed. He was going to do the exact opposite.

A challenge set for both of them and both will stop at nothing to get what they want. But all is not what it seems as they are pushed towards each other and further away from everything they once knew.

  • bad
  • badboy
  • boy
  • broken
  • family
  • famous
  • love
  • popstar
  • relationship
  • stalker
  • star
wesleyfinnt wesleyfinnt Apr 30, 2016
HazelFarahFrost HazelFarahFrost Nov 01, 2014
No grammar mistakes were evident.
                              I like Paige's character. She is independent and stubborn. She stood up for herself against the school's bad boy. You gotta have guts for that .
                              The mystery behind Paige's sister sounds interesting. I want to know more! 
                              Keep writing!
GabHale GabHale Oct 30, 2014
I love how assertive Paige is! You've done well at describing her. she seems like the type of girl who doesn't take anything from anyone and is quite independent!
GabHale GabHale Oct 30, 2014
love the background info, but I feel that this paragraph dragged on a bit too much. most of the sentences are run-ons and could be divided into smaller sentences that would be easier to read.
TheLittleBigWorld TheLittleBigWorld Oct 28, 2014
The plot seems interesting but I do agree that the characters are introduced too quickly. Else, keep going ;)
infinitywordlover infinitywordlover Oct 18, 2014
First of all, your cover is beautiful, but I do feel the characters are being introduced too quickly and we can't get a feel for the main character. But your flow is great and easy to read and you do very well in keeping the reader occupied!