Azalea (My Angel Mate)

Azalea (My Angel Mate)

55.4K Reads 3K Votes 55 Part Story
Justin C.P. Kelly By jcpk115 Completed

Azalea was dying.  She could feel her life's essence seeping from the gaping wound in her side.  When she heard an angel land next to her and felt the sword from her hand get pulled away. Azalea believed the fates had answered her prayers for a quick death. She looked up into his amazing amethyst eyes and knew immediately he was her soul mate.  Not that it mattered.  Being soul mates meant nothing if you were enemies. So, imagine her surprise when he shifted back into the form of an angel and gently lifted her body in his talons and took flight.

ofbandsandbooks_ ofbandsandbooks_ Jul 05, 2016
this paragraph is inconsistent. In the beginning, it is in 3rd person, and by the end, it's in 1st person
zooblesz zooblesz Jan 03
I love the fact that you did a diffrent storyline on the soulmates thing. Its diffrent from alot of other works on werewolves. Great job!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Bonnie12344 Bonnie12344 Jan 21
So ahile and it won't be on wattpad?  Cause I'd rather not waste my time onna book that won't be here when years pass because it's in a book store and not free to on wattpad
GreydieGayel GreydieGayel Jan 11, 2015
:) This is the kind of story I'm looking for. Great job and keep up the good work!
weareallmadhere001 weareallmadhere001 Jan 09, 2015
No problem. Always like to help out a fellow writer. If you ever need anyone to help edit, you can ask me. If you want.
weareallmadhere001 weareallmadhere001 Jan 07, 2015
I agree with luvmeeh (heheh) you have the great beginnings of a story here. I've only read the first chapter, and its great. But you do have a very noticeable flaw. Just in this chapter, though. You change... persons? Like first person and second person. does that make sense?