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Freak of Nature | WattpadPrize '14 [Complete]

Freak of Nature | WattpadPrize '14 [Complete]

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Sanya By xxSMxx Completed


Christine Elsinore was an orphan, a girl with a tragic past. She wanted to start anew, find a good job and settle down in California leaving behind all of her horrible memories, with her sweet and loving grandmother. But no matter how hard she tried the demons of pain wouldn’t leave her in peace. Tortured by the nightmares of her parents murder and the mysterious loss of her childhood memories, Christine finds out that there was more to her story than just a tragedy in the past…

A visit from her ex-boyfriend and the reawakening of a creature from the dark, Christine is in for a big shock! People are hiding secrets, people close to her and she needs to find out who before all hell breaks loose. But things like this always hold a price. The more you dig the more dirt you spill and it is no surprise when her own grandmother has hidden a truth from her…a terrible secret. Christine was about to discover the other side of her nature…of her being human and something more…of her being the very aberration of nature!

[ FIRST DRAFT -- since this is a first draft, there will be errors, typos and mistakes. You have been warned.]

*cover by @kimbasgirl*

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Jeny21 Jeny21 Aug 18, 2015
Really like the description. It seems more like a quote or poem and i really love it.
xxSMxx xxSMxx May 08, 2014
@artlol08 thanks :) ! I am glad you liked the description ^^
BabylionSakura BabylionSakura Apr 14, 2014
Goof start, it builds up suspense for what's to come. I have so many questions right now, so I'm just going to keep on reading :)
jmnovick jmnovick Apr 06, 2014
Ok - I'm going to PM you now.  
                              My BA doesn't mean I'm good at writing, only that I'm serious about it.  So take my comments and use them if they work for you, but feel free to ignore anything that doesn't.
- - Dec 01, 2013
I like the prologue. The girl seems like she's very different from the boy by the way she speaks :)
starparadise starparadise Nov 26, 2013
Nice prologue. I like how you left the characters unidentified, as it adds a sense of mystery to the story. It makes you want to read on and find out more.