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just maybe adjust the phrasing on the line "Through life and death..." its a bit too long i think to go with your other phrasing.
it was very nice. flowed naturally. beautiful rhymes! great work.
I loved it. Especially the last part. 'until death should we part, the only death is my unbeating heart'
that is powerful. i liked it.
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sorry it took so long to comment this. it was really good. i liked it
i really like it, the layout and everything is soo different from other people's stories. keep up the good work :)
thanks, it was beautiful when i went there and thought i would share how spectacular it was. Another memory for the box.