Poems

Poems

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Danielle By danielleb333 Updated Jun 17, 2012

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  • cat
  • chance
  • cold
  • death
  • dove
  • embarrassed
  • emotion
  • emotions
  • energy
  • english
  • eternity
  • faith
  • falling
  • family
  • fantasy
  • fate
  • fear
  • feeling
  • fire
  • flame
  • forgivess
  • friendship
  • fright
  • funny
  • grave
  • gross
  • hamlet
  • heart
  • heartache
  • hell
  • hope
  • human
  • ice
  • interesting
  • life
  • loss
  • love
  • mystery
  • numb
  • one
  • phobia
  • poetry
  • poetrycontest
  • public
  • race
  • rooms
  • sacrificed
  • scared
  • security
  • single
  • speaking
  • stage
  • teen
  • waiting
  • world
therightthere therightthere Jun 24, 2011
just maybe adjust the phrasing on the line "Through life and death..." its a bit too long i think to go with your other phrasing.
Rebeca1991 Rebeca1991 Jul 08, 2010
it was very nice. flowed naturally. beautiful rhymes! great work.
LovelyLies996 LovelyLies996 Jul 06, 2010
I loved it. Especially the last part. 'until death should we part, the only death is my unbeating heart'    
                              that is powerful. i liked it. 
                              please check out mi page by the way. i'm new hurr
Arkain Arkain Jun 21, 2010
sorry it took so long to comment this. it was really good. i liked it
izziekhan izziekhan May 20, 2010
 i really like it, the layout and everything is soo different from other people's stories. keep up the good work :)
danielleb333 danielleb333 Apr 23, 2010
thanks, it was beautiful when i went there and thought i would share how spectacular it was. Another memory for the box.