Valentines daughter (on hold)

Valentines daughter (on hold)

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tessa12468 By tessa12468 Updated Apr 14, 2015

Clary~
Ever since I was a baby my farther Valentine Morgernstern had raised me and trained me to be one of the best shadowhunters of the shadow world. My mother Jocelyn Morgernstern or should I say Fairchild left me to die in a house surrounded by flames if it hadn't been for my farther I would be dead but that was 15 years ago I have been loyal to my farther trained as hard as I could even to breaking point. My brother Jonathan Morgernstern was always loyal to my farther and does anything he asks but my brother trains me sometimes and can be harsh but that is what was necessary to help me survive.  it was only last year I went on my first mission to kill a filthy demon and now I am to kill another tonight in New York.

Sorry I am a true grammar nerd.  Please use quotation marks, paragraphs, and better punctuation
- - May 07
You really need to use punctuation marks. And try to capitalize. No offense.
Please puctuate, at least 1 full stop would be good and new line new talker
Ok, while I do like it, I won't be able to read it because for me it's almost illegible because of my dyslexia, and the you have written. Please get an editor, and than I'll read it. I would like to read it, honestly.
Genny098765 Genny098765 Dec 06, 2015
Really good book!! And i always wondered wont it hurt to put a dagger in ur bra?
Conall717 Conall717 Jul 14, 2015
I liked the story! Apart from the lack of punctuation and indents, it was fast paced and really precise with the original books!