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Valentines daughter (on hold)

Valentines daughter (on hold)

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🌟Tay🌟 By tessa12468 Updated Apr 14, 2015

Ever since I was a baby my farther Valentine Morgernstern had raised me and trained me to be one of the best shadowhunters of the shadow world. My mother Jocelyn Morgernstern or should I say Fairchild left me to die in a house surrounded by flames if it hadn't been for my farther I would be dead but that was 15 years ago I have been loyal to my farther trained as hard as I could even to breaking point. My brother Jonathan Morgernstern was always loyal to my farther and does anything he asks but my brother trains me sometimes and can be harsh but that is what was necessary to help me survive.  it was only last year I went on my first mission to kill a filthy demon and now I am to kill another tonight in New York.

ains246 ains246 Apr 17
Maybe the blade was one of those switch blades that like flick out but seriously farther their is one r in that word
KillerElla2956 KillerElla2956 Dec 30, 2016
Hi um i have to point this out but like ummm you kind of spelled write wrong......
ShadowhunterDiverge ShadowhunterDiverge Oct 22, 2016
Sorry I am a true grammar nerd.  Please use quotation marks, paragraphs, and better punctuation
- - May 07, 2016
You really need to use punctuation marks. And try to capitalize. No offense.
Alpha_Spacewalker Alpha_Spacewalker Nov 04, 2016
Please puctuate, at least 1 full stop would be good and new line new talker
BiancaDiAngelo9 BiancaDiAngelo9 Feb 06, 2016
Ok, while I do like it, I won't be able to read it because for me it's almost illegible because of my dyslexia, and the you have written. Please get an editor, and than I'll read it. I would like to read it, honestly.