Ever Ever After

Ever Ever After

705 Reads 13 Votes 6 Part Story
Jenna By PotentiallyJenna Updated Dec 11, 2010

My name is Evermore.  I live in a small town, go to high school, have friends, family, and things to do, and I may seem just like anybody else... but I have a secret.  When I was six years old, I was given a gift; the gift of premonition, and although it may seem more like a curse, I must have it for a reason... mustn't I?

PotentiallyJenna PotentiallyJenna Jun 21, 2010
@Abi_Kirk86 Thank you, and I wasn't aware that anybody's speech was in the same paragraph.  I'll go over it later, thanks for telling me! - Jenna
AE_KIrk AE_KIrk Jun 21, 2010
I really like this story! You have nice description, just mind the lines in which characters speak. Each character should have their own line and then a break in which the next character speaks...makes it easier for the reader!
                              It is good though! Well done!