Moonlit

Moonlit

78.8K Reads 3.9K Votes 36 Part Story
R x By darkeningg Completed

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DrEaMQuEeNX DrEaMQuEeNX Jul 19
That is exactly what I want!! Sincere words with truth shining in his eyes
Already enough to make me want to cry... And, by the way, I've decided to love this story.
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                              when the boys in books are more romantic thay guys in real life.
                              
                              
                              sttrruuggllless
safesolitude safesolitude Dec 15, 2014
I like how short and sweet your prologue is and how you didn't introduce your main characters separately, but together, as lovers. I'm sure it'll draw a lot of readers in, so that's a good start to your story. I just couldn't stop feeling like this was a werewolf story hahaha
linguistic- linguistic- Dec 13, 2014
Aww!!! Oh my word, I can't believe how lovely this was! My heart was, like, crippling because it wanted a boy like this!
                              
                              Seriously, this is magnificent. From the very beginning you hooked me in with your awesome descriptive words, and then the gushy-ness, and romantical-ness just kept me reading XD
kweezybby1993 kweezybby1993 Nov 22, 2014
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                              I have nothing bad to say so far. This looks like it will b an interesting story. Keep up the good work!!