Half Blood  (Valkyrie Rising Book One)

Half Blood (Valkyrie Rising Book One)

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Valkyrie Rising By ValkyrieRising Updated Oct 27, 2012 02:00PM

Teenage incubus Will, a law-abiding demon citizen, is being hunted, and he doesn't know why. On top of that, his best friend Laila hates his new girl friend Niin. As they race to find Will's would-be killers, their search uncovers a truth far worse than they ever imagined… ...  ...  ...  ...  ...  ...
    Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Romance/Paranormal

dhlaurence dhlaurence Jun 17, 2013 03:57PM
Hi Valkyrie, you got this going pretty quickly. The aids all talk about hooking your reader and you certainly did that.
bnlfan bnlfan May 28, 2013 10:06AM
Great start. Tension was good and final comment a good hook :-)
QueenStorm QueenStorm May 23, 2013 12:56PM
This first chapter got my attention that's forsure:) I look forward to reading the rest
:) This is very intriguing I would've loved to read more! Thanks for the dedication.
Jinx97 Jinx97 Nov 20, 2012 01:41AM
Great story so far that I've read. Thanks a ton for the dedication. Good luck on on your stories! ^_^
sugaclouds sugaclouds Oct 31, 2012 09:55PM
I'm interested now...And since there are demons involved, I'm hooked. I'm going to read now. *voted*
                                    P.S You're a good, no GREAT writer!