Collection of poems written by me for me..more on prayers, self-thing, inspirational and any stuff that made me to be ME..
Ah! This was just beautiful. They say, when something comes from the heart, it touches the heart. Extraordinary. I loved the choices of words and the composition of the phrases. Outstanding.
Hey! I'm a new writer on here
Could I please ask you to come and read my story and leave any criticism you have?
I will read yours, but not on the condition you read mine because I actually do wanna read yours!
your an amazing poet and this is such an original poem and i get where you're coming from. i loved it.
the last line really made it beautiful and calming!
your title is great and it's really awesome!!
@ArieRaven3 thanks for that compliment, actually i always think first of the title then i will work for the content for 1-3 days..hehe
I really like this, quite powerful and meaningful. You seem to be better at giving titles to your work then i am ( i usually dont title my stuff, i have a friend do it) haha. but i do like this poem alot:)