The Chase

The Chase

1 Part Story 926 Reads 34 Votes
Mary By Mezmerised Completed

The chase is on. Will she win the attention of the good looking man across the bar? What will she do if she does? Who is really chasing who?
    
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@Mezmerised i love your writing style, another short but great read, thanks for sharing :)
Mezmerised Mezmerised May 11, 2013 10:12AM
@VictorBruneski Thank you :o) a chance at redemption, missed.
VictorBruneski VictorBruneski May 10, 2013 11:25PM
Wow, that was really emotional, not to mention so well written.  I guess revenge is a dish best served cold.  Although I lved how she gave him a chance to seeif he learned his lesson.
StarPaine StarPaine Sep 22, 2012 04:25AM
you are really very good at writing emotional short story!!!!
Really lovely story - well crafted and no, I didn't see the ending.  Love the whole liquor theme from beginning to end.
bedda357 bedda357 Sep 18, 2012 05:09PM
A very well-crafted short story with beautiful descriptive passages.  Keeps the reader guessing.  Dark, compelling and emotive.  A great read, once again.