The Chase

The Chase

955 Reads 36 Votes 1 Part Story
Mary By Mezmerised Completed

The chase is on. Will she win the attention of the good looking man across the bar? What will she do if she does? Who is really chasing who?

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Lil_Miss_Muffet Lil_Miss_Muffet Aug 12, 2013
@Mezmerised i love your writing style, another short but great read, thanks for sharing :)
Mezmerised Mezmerised May 11, 2013
@VictorBruneski Thank you :o) a chance at redemption, missed.
VictorBruneski VictorBruneski May 10, 2013
Wow, that was really emotional, not to mention so well written.  I guess revenge is a dish best served cold.  Although I lved how she gave him a chance to seeif he learned his lesson.
StarPaine StarPaine Sep 22, 2012
you are really very good at writing emotional short story!!!!
Catherineparady Catherineparady Sep 19, 2012
Really lovely story - well crafted and no, I didn't see the ending.  Love the whole liquor theme from beginning to end.
bedda357 bedda357 Sep 18, 2012
A very well-crafted short story with beautiful descriptive passages.  Keeps the reader guessing.  Dark, compelling and emotive.  A great read, once again.