chains and whips excite me...

chains and whips excite me...

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Hya By XchocolateXloverX Updated Mar 21, 2015

"1 million going once, goin..."
"Ten million!" a guy yelled out from the back of the room, suddenly everyone starts to sit back down,
"Fifteen million for the hottie!" yelled out a deep voice, i had been called hottie many times tonight but this made me blush.
"Fifteen million going once..." i prayed i wouldnt be brought by my crush, i really did. i crossed my fingers behind my back as i continued to lay on my side on this couch, in my oh so revealing bra that they purposly got three sizes to small, and my thong that was a little too tight for my liking.
"Going twice...."
i crossed my fingers even more and through my ear piece was told to do my seductive smile. i did as i was told and pulled off the sexiest smile i could and i directed it towards my crush, i noticed he winked at me, but suddenly his face was from sexy to shock
"Thirty miilion!!" another guy yelled out, my eyes darted from my now angry crush to the other guy, he was just as attractive, great, war between the hottie's.
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laina47 laina47 Jun 22, 2015
Good storyline... but I can't read it because of the TERRIBLE sentence structure.