Dreamcatcher (ONC 2020)

Dreamcatcher (ONC 2020)

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August Channing By SmokeAndOranges Updated 6 days ago

"We're at six thousand feet, Cap'n. There shouldn't be land at six thousand feet."  


Rav is apprenticed by his father's wishes on an airship as unsettling as the deliveries it makes. The Dreamcatcher's owner is the only captain on the continent who will sail any cargo through any part of the sky. Even parts nobody else will go. 

So when the ship gets caught in a storm and left rudderless in the Khaalee Navachandr, a ship-eating crescent in the middle of the ocean, nobody is coming to rescue them. Their only hope is to reach land to make repairs. 

The land they find, though, might only bring more trouble.


ONC 2020 entry. First round qualifier. Updates on Mondays. 

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For the judges:
2k : End of Chapter Two
8k : Page break (the airship icon) of Chapter Six