A Glimpse of Your Soul

A Glimpse of Your Soul

20 Part Story 955 Reads 80 Votes
Maria Krause By MariaKrause Updated Sep 07, 2014

Robbery detective Cedric Rutherford has, like the rest of his kin, a strange ability. In his eyes all humans are surrounded by a color--the color of their souls. However, there is a far weirder thing that he can see: ghosts. Ghosts of whose existence ordinary humans have no idea. 
    
    One day he meets Misae Davey, an odd, small, unimpressive girl, seemingly weak, but with a very powerful aura. Driven by his innate curiosity, he is determined to find out the source of the brightly burning red surrounding her, unable to fathom what kind of feelings she could repress to the point of looking lifeless.
    
    [cover by salmasey]

It's very enjoyable! I've longed to read some good detective stories and I would say, yours is definitely one of the them!(: Can't wait to know what would happen! And the idea of the aura seems interesting, too!
CrowKonig CrowKonig Jul 11, 2014 05:23AM
I like the protagonist's personality. He makes the adventure very enjoyable to read :)
CoralinaCook CoralinaCook Nov 17, 2012 05:12PM
I love the title of the chapter! I also love the chapter too! Keep it up!
Orangefyre Orangefyre Sep 21, 2012 11:17PM
You, my dear, are, as always, a fantastic writer. Therefore, write more. :)
AmidstTheRoar AmidstTheRoar Sep 13, 2012 05:51PM
Aaaaaaand I love your story :DD Can't wait for the next one!