A Glimpse of Your Soul

20 Part Story 951 Reads 80 Votes
Maria Krause By MariaKrause Updated a year ago
Robbery detective Cedric Rutherford has, like the rest of his kin, a strange ability. In his eyes all humans are surrounded by a color--the color of their souls. However, there is a far weirder thing that he can see: ghosts. Ghosts of whose existence ordinary humans have no idea. 
    
    One day he meets Misae Davey, an odd, small, unimpressive girl, seemingly weak, but with a very powerful aura. Driven by his innate curiosity, he is determined to find out the source of the brightly burning red surrounding her, unable to fathom what kind of feelings she could repress to the point of looking lifeless.
    
    [cover by salmasey]
Prepare yourself. 
                                    
                                    The only thing I really had an issue with was Cedric and Misae's interaction. There wasn't that much; I wanted to see just how completely shut-off she was. Cedric commented that he was surprised by her aura, but I wanted a little more of her blandness to drive that point home. Really beat it senseless, you know? 
                                    
                                    Good points: pretty much frigging everything. Lucky wench. You've always been fantastic at crafting more serious stories and really getting into your characters's psyches. Now go promote your story, or so help me I will do it for you!
Prepare yourself. 
                                    
                                    The only thing I really had an issue with was Cedric and Misae's interaction. There wasn't that much; I wanted to see just how completely shut-off she was. Cedric commented that he was surprised by her aura, but I wanted a little more of her blandness to drive that point home. Really beat it senseless, you know? 
                                    
                                    Good points: pretty much frigging everything. Lucky wench. You've always been fantastic at crafting more serious stories and really getting into your characters's psyches. Now go promote your story, or so help me I will do it for you!
Prepare yourself. 
                                    
                                    The only thing I really had an issue with was Cedric and Misae's interaction. There wasn't that much; I wanted to see just how completely shut-off she was. Cedric commented that he was surprised by her aura, but I wanted a little more of her blandness to drive that point home. Really beat it senseless, you know? 
                                    
                                    Good points: pretty much frigging everything. Lucky wench. You've always been fantastic at crafting more serious stories and really getting into your characters's psyches. Now go promote your story, or so help me I will do it for you!
Prepare yourself. 
                                    
                                    The only thing I really had an issue with was Cedric and Misae's interaction. There wasn't that much; I wanted to see just how completely shut-off she was. Cedric commented that he was surprised by her aura, but I wanted a little more of her blandness to drive that point home. Really beat it senseless, you know? 
                                    
                                    Good points: pretty much frigging everything. Lucky wench. You've always been fantastic at crafting more serious stories and really getting into your characters's psyches. Now go promote your story, or so help me I will do it for you!
Prepare yourself. 
                                    
                                    The only thing I really had an issue with was Cedric and Misae's interaction. There wasn't that much; I wanted to see just how completely shut-off she was. Cedric commented that he was surprised by her aura, but I wanted a little more of her blandness to drive that point home. Really beat it senseless, you know? 
                                    
                                    Good points: pretty much frigging everything. Lucky wench. You've always been fantastic at crafting more serious stories and really getting into your characters's psyches. Now go promote your story, or so help me I will do it for you!