The Lady in Armour

The Lady in Armour

8.2K Reads 317 Votes 20 Part Story
Yna By Damonh Updated Nov 14, 2014

This is the story of Jo who dared to change everyone's destiny. With the help of some friends and the mystic fire dragon of north, Jo delved into the world of spirits, searched for solutions on how to end everyone's suffering. Come and see Jo's mischievous adventures and twisted love story.

janefoxx janefoxx Oct 22, 2012
That was a really interesting start. :) It sounds a little cliche, but we can already tell that there's a major twist in the story. :) I do suggest that you fix the gaps in between the kremp.
RahniaForever RahniaForever Oct 01, 2012
I love how you've written this :) Amazing descriptions and interesting dialogue! Great job. Voted
De2ire De2ire Oct 01, 2012
Excellent start. The relationship between the mother and son is quite unique. Your descriptions are done flawlesly and your character Liam seems realistic enough. My favourite would have to be the last line, somthing my own mother would say.
Damonh Damonh Sep 30, 2012
@Deeperthanyouthink: i don't know.. the thought just came out of nowhere.. ^_^ thank you..
Deeperthanyouthink Deeperthanyouthink Sep 30, 2012
@Damoth What gave you inspiration to write this novel? It is very drawing! SEND IT TO A PUBLISHER! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Just_Being_Casual_ Just_Being_Casual_ Sep 30, 2012
This is a very descriptive and deep story. It's really great! :)