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Heaven Seeks: Part I of Offspring and Avatars

Heaven Seeks: Part I of Offspring and Avatars

7.4K Reads 471 Votes 21 Part Story
R.L. Novak By novakiswriting Completed

Heaven Seeks is the first installment of the Offspring and Avatar series. I wrote this story with the intentions of creating a good old-fashioned "man versus evil" action, horror. The story architecture is a throwback to the Saturday nights I had spent watching "Creature Feature", and is a tribute to the simpler stories of good versus evil. I hope you enjoy it.  

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A Marine seeks his destiny,
A mother seeks her son,
A devil seeks vengeance,
Heaven seeks its scion.

For the past three millennia, each generation of mortals produced an Avatar and an Offspring to recruit followers for an endless war between the Heavenly and Hellish Divine. 

Avatars wielded the lux, the benevolent power of light to help mortals live in harmony. 

The Offspring dominated with the dark powers of the acerbus; enticing mortals through trickery and deceit. 

It is never known where they will manifest, but the Divine are ever vigilant, waiting for their progeny to once again walk the earth.

kanekillme kanekillme May 21, 2016
In the description I was waiting for "then everything changed when the fire nation attacked".
matthewbrownstories matthewbrownstories Jul 12, 2016
I really enjoyed reading this because your structure just really flows.   I like the story idea.  I thought the section about Scott's wife was excellent description.  The cop interview was flowing like a real conversation.  Well done!
hobo36 hobo36 Sep 14, 2016
I love the story thank you for posting it on here for everyone to read
meghan meghan Dec 29, 2015
Loving this so far!  Great descriptions; really helps me paint the picture in my mind :) can't wait to read more!
amzolt amzolt Dec 06, 2015
"...what would be considered...a soul."
                              
                              Woah...
                              
                              Good chapter---strong Profluence...
novakiswriting novakiswriting Feb 19, 2015
@robshapiro I'm glad you are enjoying it, Rob. Hope it gives you as much entertainment as Harper's in Hell has for me.