Silent Agony

Silent Agony

1 Part Story 231 Reads 34 Votes
AJ MILLER By AmalJMiller Updated Sep 12, 2012

If you ever Lost a loved one, to death, to betrayal, or maybe to just life
IF you ever got your heart broken to a million little pieces
IF your soul ever cried a thousand and one cry 
in silence
with no one to hear you
this Poem is for you ..

AmalJMiller AmalJMiller Oct 25, 2012 01:49PM
@azweiris  awwww I just your comment!!! and thank you so much, I am glad you liked it, and you felt it, thank you my lovely Azura ;D
azweiris azweiris Oct 23, 2012 02:23AM
What an emotional poetry, I felt like I was the one who's broken... :'( I could almost feel her agony, to be left alone in this world by someone she truly loved. Death is the cruelist thing to separate two lovers apart. Good luck with the Attys, my friend. ;)
AmalJMiller AmalJMiller Oct 16, 2012 10:21PM
@WeFanEveryone  hhh thank you, I am very glad you got the concept :)
WeFanEveryone WeFanEveryone Oct 16, 2012 03:36PM
That was really sad (for the lack of better words). I liked how the one that gave him life was the one he 'killed'.
AmalJMiller AmalJMiller Sep 15, 2012 06:21PM
@ChasingSkies  I am so happy it got to you, thank you so much <3
Melissa_Gray Melissa_Gray Sep 15, 2012 06:12PM
I loved this! I could feel the emotion, and darkness, and it brought tears to my eyes! Good luck in the attys! ^_^
                              
                              ~Melly