Eternal Discovery

Eternal Discovery

24 Part Story 78.4K Reads 1.9K Votes
Theodore By Theodore21 Completed

Introducing this unique video-game inspired action story. 
    
    Welcome to the war torn land of Celestia. The world was once only home to two divine beings who ravaged the world in endless combat. They put their battle to rest only for it to be carried on to their children. The divines beings left a message that only a kind heretic would save the world. Centuries later the world continues it's war...and in the midst rises the hero.
    
    A great Fantasy story with plenty of action and a unique fighting power called soul-fusion this is one adventure you don't want to miss out on. So come on in, you won't regret it
    
    A Remake called Eternal Spirit has begun
    
    I am in urgent need of a new cover can someone help me please?
    
    Full Credit for Current cover goes to JosephGross

Theodore21 Theodore21 Dec 28, 2012 10:26AM
@NoOneLikesYou  Thanks a lot for the comment. It's a shame because I only just finished editing it. (I'm putting it forward for publishing you see). Hope you keep reading
Theodore21 Theodore21 Nov 10, 2012 04:02PM
@bonnieiloveyou4  Thanks very much for the comment. I ask more for reads than comments but any comments are deeply appreicated
danniphantom danniphantom Oct 25, 2012 05:03AM
It's like a fairytale. Haha. I wish I have the talent to write stories like this.X
Theodore21 Theodore21 Sep 21, 2012 10:44AM
@makexbelieve Thanks for the comment. I've worked on a it for a while. There's still plenty of errors here and there but improving all the time
makexbelieve makexbelieve Sep 21, 2012 09:22AM
Interesting start; you've clearly thought quite carefully about the fantasy elements of the plot and have set the scene well.
Theodore21 Theodore21 Sep 20, 2012 08:42PM
@LustHateLove 
                                    Thank you for pointing out the errors and have amended them accordingly