KING OF THE SEA [mxm]

KING OF THE SEA [mxm]

24.6K Reads 930 Votes 11 Part Story
Dez By FantasyDeath Completed

it's about pirates and shit in a foreign land in another world. it's a malexmale story and will contain reletionships between two men. i haven't come up with a good description yet so just read the damn thing. it's better then it sounds.

I think perhaps a beta reader or someone you know who's good at English proofreading it would help improve this. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors, and not enough paragraph spacing. I couldn't keep reading this.
Didnt the person who shot him was sent by his father though? 😂 karma
I would've voted because I liked the story, until I got to the random space at the bottom of the page.
MadisonMcghee3 MadisonMcghee3 Jan 09, 2015
Your welcome!!! Your story is really good too so its no problem...
FantasyDeath FantasyDeath Jan 09, 2015
@MadisonMcghee3  thank you for voting and commenting. it means alot to me that people like what I wrote and actually read it.  :D