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Dez By FantasyDeath Completed

it's about pirates and shit in a foreign land in another world. it's a malexmale story and will contain reletionships between two men. i haven't come up with a good description yet so just read the damn thing. it's better then it sounds.

angelbankai45 angelbankai45 Sep 19, 2016
I think perhaps a beta reader or someone you know who's good at English proofreading it would help improve this. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors, and not enough paragraph spacing. I couldn't keep reading this.
-ReignAdore -ReignAdore Dec 27, 2016
I came because the description yelled at me to do it. 😂😂 i love it!
roxyvzh roxyvzh Mar 08
'Interesting' I'm sorry its just that I used to make mistakes with that word because of how we say it. Then I learned how to spell it and that's how I pronounce it.
shadow_of_the_moon shadow_of_the_moon Aug 27, 2016
I would've voted because I liked the story, until I got to the random space at the bottom of the page.
MadisonMcghee3 MadisonMcghee3 Jan 09, 2015
Your welcome!!! Your story is really good too so its no problem...
FantasyDeath FantasyDeath Jan 09, 2015
@MadisonMcghee3  thank you for voting and commenting. it means alot to me that people like what I wrote and actually read it.  :D