it's about pirates and shit in a foreign land in another world. it's a malexmale story and will contain reletionships between two men. i haven't come up with a good description yet so just read the damn thing. it's better then it sounds.
I think perhaps a beta reader or someone you know who's good at English proofreading it would help improve this. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors, and not enough paragraph spacing. I couldn't keep reading this.
Didnt the person who shot him was sent by his father though? 😂 karma
I would've voted because I liked the story, until I got to the random space at the bottom of the page.
Your welcome!!! Your story is really good too so its no problem...
@MadisonMcghee3 thank you for voting and commenting. it means alot to me that people like what I wrote and actually read it. :D