With No Warning (Romance/Inspirational)(Complete)

With No Warning (Romance/Inspirational)(Complete)

134K Reads 1.9K Votes 26 Part Story
Li By stained_glasses Completed

The last thing she expected was to seek shelter in a freezer, with a handsome stranger, while a tornado ripped the roof from above her head. Dakota survives the twister, but in the days to come, will her heart survive the emotional twister of Evan, her hot freezer mate, on that fateful day?

erinarcher erinarcher Feb 20
Cashier: The only one crazy enough to be out in this storm is you, dear. 
                              
                              *Mr. hot pants walks in the door* 
                              
                              Cashier: You and this fellow.
AliyahJanae AliyahJanae Jul 10, 2014
Good descriptions, but the narration feels a tad detached from what Dakota is experiencing. Maybe rethink some word choices.
UniquelyMemorable UniquelyMemorable Oct 06, 2013
Your writing is beautifully crafted and not too wordy. I appreciate that.
LastxKingsxQueen LastxKingsxQueen Jan 11, 2013
I honestly don't know exactly why, but I can't read this.
                              I think the way you have written in 3rd person was too... matured? I found it tedious to read.
                              
                              I mean no offence.
marlonteixera_ marlonteixera_ Oct 04, 2012
How the hell do you write so well?!
                              Your description is so accurate, it's honestly just perfect :)
                              x
WendyWrites WendyWrites Oct 02, 2012
@stained_glasses Oh that is sad!! 
                              
                              Have been a little buried this week...but I'm hoping to read more of this one tonight or tomorrow...i really want to see where it goes from here! I should be commenting on chapters later!! =c]