Poetry - A collection of my finest poems

Poetry - A collection of my finest poems

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Dya Vandii By Veliki_Filozof Updated Feb 05, 2012

Please I really want to become a published author so if you read leave a comment plz plz plz plz plz... and share it with any friend you think might enjoy it or reminds you of... Thanks once again for reading and remember if you like em why not fan me

  • affirm
  • babes
  • belief
  • comical
  • comment
  • death
  • fan
  • joy
  • moon
  • read
  • self-empowering
  • suckysucky
Grittercritter Grittercritter Feb 05, 2012
In all honesty I don't like this nearly as much as your other stuff. I find it kind of cliched but some of your other poems are really awesome, and I'm glad I went on to read them!
MeChasingCars MeChasingCars Apr 27, 2011
@Veliki_Filozof Oh no, lol, your poem's awesome. Namabish's comment sounded like she was describing Bleach. Haha ^.^
Veliki_Filozof Veliki_Filozof Apr 27, 2011
@MeChasingCars lol i know i know but its a poem about pain and just between you and me i thought it was more like Alice in wonderland.... Feel free to read and comment on the rest
namabish namabish Apr 25, 2011
This is really nice; it reminds me of this show I watch about monsters that have holes in their chest, because that's where their hearts used to be.
                              
parametric parametric Apr 07, 2011
Wow. I love the repetition on the first line of each stanza. Great poem :)
DAREDEVIL92 DAREDEVIL92 Apr 06, 2011
wow...thats exactly what i feel when i think of my ex bf.....how weird...