Black Widows Society

Black Widows Society

4 Part Story 5.5K Reads 118 Votes
Marie By painismydrug Updated Jan 06, 2012

Jeremy Hawthorne disguises himself as a wealthy member of the aristocracy to investigate several suspicious deaths suspected to be the hand work of a secret group of women known as the Black Widows, championed by the beautiful and enchanting Lady Adelaide Huntingdon, widow of the late Earl of Langdon.
  Adelaide is intrigued by the handsome Viscount who had taken the ballrooms of London by storm. She is charmed when he begins to pay attention to her and allows himself to be drawn into her web. 
Will love prevail or will duty conquer the Black Widows Society?

DevilSeeker DevilSeeker Jan 22, 2012 10:57AM
This is definitely awesome. I mean, wow, the woman is vicious and cunning. I'm going to enjoy reading this.
boofhead boofhead Jan 06, 2012 07:15AM
Oooo this looks good. I know it's not finished but will you be writing more soon?
uzmarium uzmarium Aug 26, 2011 04:53PM
i really liked the way u started ur story...... i also admire ur writing technique.....
tracilynn tracilynn Apr 19, 2011 08:36AM
Good Lord Hahahahaha! Now thats slap your knee funny!
                              
                              Maybe my sense of humor is off.... but when I found out she tricked me into thinking she really was devestated, it really made me laugh.
                              
                              What a great and promising start!
bmaz96 bmaz96 Apr 13, 2011 12:59AM
i love how the readers jumped from 109 to over 800 in 2 days. you've gotta update asap! cant wait to read more! :) ps i love how complex of a character adelaide is. it adds just the perfect touch
alissende alissende Apr 07, 2011 10:54AM
This is very good! It certainly hooks the reader and you write very well. It's a pleasure to read.